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07 January 2009 @ 03:17 pm
[Kihae] Reflections  
*wipes away the cobwebs*
Yes, an update! It's been forever. D:

Title: Reflections
Pairing: Kihae
Author: robotiques
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,436
Summary: Kihae smut in a bathroom. :D
Disclaimer: Don't own the boys, and sadly never will. They already sold their souls to SM.

This wasn't exactly how Donghae had pictured the night would end up. He thought that after countless hours of gut busting Noraebang, and endless amounts of food shoveled into their mouths that he would end up perched on the couch in their dorm. In his favorite pajamas, and fighting to stay awake while the other members watched ridiculous game shows.

He never thought he would be pinned against the dingy bathroom counter top of the men’s restroom at the Noraebang restaurant. With strong, forceful hands gliding up and down his torso, around the back of his neck, and through his hair. His mouth under siege, and a warm body pressed tightly against his.

He never thought he could feel this free.

Donghae writhed in pleasure when those same lips that infiltrated his own just seconds ago, were now moving across his jaw line, and down his neck. He clung tightly to the others' shirt, and sighed heavily when he felt their lips form a perfect smile against the base of his neck.

"Kibum..." Donghae whispered, barely audible over the hum of the fan in the air vent above their heads. He almost didn’t recognize his own voice. It was low and husky, filled with the sound of desperation. His mind was starting to blur, and his body was reacting aggressively to the unadulterated movements of Kibum’s velvet tongue rolling over his collarbone.

A warm breath was released over his neck as Kibum lifted his head, and hovered next to Donghae’s ear. Donghae dug his nails callously into Kibum’s shoulder blades as he felt his pearly white teeth latch onto his earlobe. The low growl that was emitted from Kibum’s throat didn’t go unnoticed by Donghae. The primitive sound made Donghae’s heart accelerate, and he guided Kibum’s lips back to his own. Their tongues intertwined, and danced about to a hasty rhythm. Donghae nipped lightly at Kibum’s swollen bottom lip, and caused a slight gasp to break free from the younger’s throat.

Donghae felt dizzy as Kibum’s strong hands gripped his shoulders, and flung his body around. He stared at their reflection in the foggy mirror. He let his eyes skim over the scene before him. His hair was tousled, and his lips were slightly swollen and parted. A pink tint covered his neck where Kibum’s lips had explored; his eyes were dark and glossy. He watched as his body moved elegantly on its own in reaction to every touch. His eyes traveled to watch Kibum’s reflection. His face was hidden in the wavy mass of hair that fell around Donghae’s neck. He watched as Kibum’s hands glided slowly down both of his arms, and rested on top of his own hands. He felt Kibum roll his hips against his backside, and his eyelids dropped down over his eyes. He hung his head low, with his palms gripping the edge of the counter.

“I…” Kibum started, but his voice died off with a shake of his head. Instead he snaked his arms around Donghae’s torso, and steadied them on the waistband of the elders jeans.

Kibum wasn’t always the best at expressing himself verbally.

Donghae heard the zipper of his pants, and tilted his head enough so he could glance into the mirror. Steady hands skimmed across his abdomen before slightly dipping underneath the waistband of his boxer briefs. There was a pregnant pause in Kibum’s actions as he stared intently at Donghae’s reflection. Donghae could only guess that either Kibum was asking for permission, or teasing him.

He placed his own hand over top of Kibum’s, and with a slight nudge both of their hands dipped lower under the soft fabric. His mind whirled, and his blood boiled the second Kibum’s fingertips grazed his pulsating erection. On impulse, Donghae wrapped his and Kibum’s hand around the heated appendage. His head landed back against Kibum’s hard shoulder as they both slowly began to stroke. With every second, every stroke, Donghae felt the world around him become more and more jumbled. His breathing was erratic, and his heart was pumping so fast he could hear the beat in his ears.

“God….” Donghae choked as he got closer, closer to his edge. He had an almost uncontrollable urge to scream, to scream the passion out. Instead he tightened his grip around Kibum’s hand, around his erection. His hand started to tremble over top Kibum's as the strokes became faster, needier.

Donghae felt himself slipping further away. The pleasure that coursed through his body, and sparked every nerve was enveloping him entirely. He used every ounce of energy he had, and opened his heavy lids only to lock eyes with Kibum's reflection. The dark orbs that stared back at him were almost jet black, as were his own. He watched as a feverish red tint grew stronger on Kibum's cheeks, and the younger laid his forehead on Donghae's shoulder. Maybe Kibum had a slight stage fright. How ironic.

Suddenly Donghae felt Kibum's hand stop, and before he could react Kibum had Donghae back into his original position; back against the counter, and he was face to face with the younger again. He could only stare in confusion, his nerves still on fire from Kibum's unfinished work. He stuttered slightly, "Wh-what?"

Kibum licked his lips seductively, and flashed a Heechul-like smirk before leaning his chest heavily against Donghae's. He captured the dancer's lips within his own fervently, before slowly slinking his body down to the ground; only stopping once his knees hit the floor. He took no time in wrapping his warm, wet mouth around Donghae's slick member.

A whimper was emitted from Donghae's lips the second Kibum continued his actions. The soft, warm mouth moved up and down his shaft hungrily; taking him in entirely. Donghae's hips bucked the second he felt a slight graze of Kibum's teeth along the bottom of his length. It caused the fire inside himself burn out of control, and his right hand flew to Kibum's head, his fingers tangling within the dark tresses. He heard a deep moan come from Kibum's throat, and the vibration instantly traveled through his abused erection; tingling his nerves. His grip on Kibum's hair tightened, and his actions became more forceful. His hand was encouraging Kibum to take him in faster, deeper. Kibum easily obliged, and within seconds Donghae was hitting the back of Kibum’s throat repeatedly.

Donghae’s head flew back, and he stared directly at the noisy fan that hadn’t stopped turning since they first entered the bathroom. Still, with the speeding fan, the sweat continued to flow out of his pours and down his skin. His eyes closed hard as his stomach turned, and his vision underneath his eyelids went from pitch black to white hot. His knees trembled, and he let out a strained scream as he emptied his seed into Kibum’s mouth.

“Oh my God.” Donghae murmured as his legs finally gave way underneath him, and he sunk down to Kibum’s level. His head leaned against the bathroom counter. Silence hung in the air between them as they took in everything that had just happened, it all seemed like a blur to them both. A wonderful, amazing, freeing blur.

Kibum shifted slightly, and sat back on his sore knees. He opened his mouth like he was about to say something, but no words came out. His usually sound exterior was broken after such an intimate act, and his nerves were exposed.

Donghae couldn’t help but smile as he watched Kibum sit uncomfortably before him. “Nice hair.”

Kibum’s head shot up, and he quickly tended to his messy hair. “That’s all your fault”

Donghae let out a breathy laugh as he buttoned up his jeans, his hands still trembling from what had just happened between the two. He glanced back up as he heard Kibum slide closer. “Yeah…ah…I’m sorry about that.”

Kibum’s hand reached up and swept a strand of hair out of Donghae’s vision. He leaned forward and placed a gentle kiss on the corner of Donghae’s mouth. “Don’t be.”

A loud sigh escaped Donghae’s mouth, and he placed his hands on Kibum’s forearms. “We should probably get back to everyone else before they start wondering where we are.”

“That’s if they even noticed we left.” Kibum mused. He lifted himself off the floor and lent a hand to Donghae. Not breaking the hold he had on the older, they walked toward the bathroom door. He paused as he grabbed a hold of the handle, and glanced back at Donghae. “You owe me, by the way.”

Donghae just simply smiled as they exited the bathroom.

Current Mood: anxiousanxious
Current Music: "My Little Toy Gun" by HoneyHoney
renichifreak: Donghae-nice assrenichifreak on January 7th, 2009 08:34 pm (UTC)
OMFG!!! THIS IS ALL MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!::growls::


X_X-this is me after this fic!!...you actually killed me with hot kihae...

OMG, Jenna!! Who do you call to mop up the puddle of goo you prob'ly turned her into?!?!?!?!::hops bus with bucket and sponge::

Holy hell, you'd better plan on writing more soon, or I will harass you DAILY at work...moreso that I already do!!! I'm annoying!! You know that...

Dammit all...I'm a blubbering mass of rants now!!!!!::tackles you for writing uber hot fic::

Edited at 2009-01-07 08:45 pm (UTC)
renichifreak: Kihae-nicerenichifreak on January 7th, 2009 08:48 pm (UTC)
d I mentioln I'm memming this?!?! Cuz I am!!!
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파니robotiques on January 7th, 2009 08:36 pm (UTC)
Spot for music_loner.
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Raeiwrite_dotnet on January 7th, 2009 09:47 pm (UTC)
This was a gorgeous KiHae. I really liked it.
Plus it was really hot. :D
파니: Epik high 2robotiques on January 7th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thank you muchly. ^^
I'm really glad you liked it. XD
I was kind of nervous about it for some reason.
Thanks again! :D
reality has so many adverse side effects: Donghae smilesvtstarlight on January 7th, 2009 09:56 pm (UTC)
That....was freakin' HOT. I want a sequel. Like now. *giggles*

파니: Hyukjae crackedrobotiques on January 7th, 2009 10:30 pm (UTC)
XD!! Ah Tsuki! I'm so glad you liked it! *hugs*<3
=O A sequal? Hmm...*ponders*.

Edited at 2009-01-07 10:31 pm (UTC)
oh_thexirony ;oh_thexirony on January 8th, 2009 12:20 am (UTC)
;__; i hate you because i can never write good porn like you do.

^^ but seriously. uhm yes @ kihae smut. YES YES YES.
파니robotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:12 am (UTC)
I used to be scared to write porn. :X
But now I live for it. XD

Yay! I'm glad you liked it! ^^ Kihae smut is always good. even if Eunhae is my OTP
Kehlee Jay: Eunhaekehleejay on January 8th, 2009 12:57 am (UTC)
HOLY CRAP WOMAN!!! That was amazing!! See, you worried for nothing. :) And i'm not even a Kihae fan, but that was really hot! Well, Donghae in any sexual scenario is hot as hell. :-X

I lol-ed at this line:
He could only stare in confusion, his nerves still on fire from Kibum's unfinished work. He stuttered slightly, "Wh-what?"
I could just imagine Hae's cute, clueless & confused expression. XD <3

*cough*nowimgoingtogoreadyoureunhaesmut*cough* ;)
파니robotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:26 am (UTC)
OMG! Thankyouthankyou!♥
I know, I was quite proud of myself for this...but at the same time nervous like I say!? I'm so weird sometimes.

Ohhhh, I really appreciate you reading it thennnn!<3 I mean...Eunhae is my OTP, but like you said...Donghae in any sexual scenario realy is hot as hell. XD I do enjoy KiHae, KangHae, HaeWook, HaeChul...o.o Hae gets around.

Wahhhbajck thank you muchly for reading!

=O omgreally?okay! XD ♥
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파니: Hyukjae crackedrobotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:35 am (UTC)
XDDDDD! You're welcome!
and thank you, ever so muchly. ^^
Weee, these comments are making my day...my week. *___*
leunah23leunah23 on January 8th, 2009 01:45 am (UTC)
OMG!!!jhdjhdshfjhfshfhsfshalfk *dies*
the world needs more kihae nowadays...I've been dying to read one...these past few days...so thanks for this SUPER HOT fic..XDDDDD
파니: DH white  beanie.robotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
Oh so much keysmashing in all of these comments! I love it! XDDD
I agree, even if they aren't my OTP. I always love me a good KiHae.
Oh you are so very welcome! I'm glad I could be of service. >:D
Thank you for reading! It really makes my day~! ^^
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thursday.runawayxxlovee on January 8th, 2009 02:20 am (UTC)
and it was totally worth the wait. seoizkljghiodjxkbnmdh. EEEK.

I am so glad my room is the coldest room in the house or I would have burned up or melted or done both or seomething because that was THHHEEEE HOTTEST KIHAEEE I HAVEE EVERRR REAAADDDDDDD~~~~~~~~~ uxdhikjlmntgdknrj. *spazzes*

I don't even like the pairing that much but you make them so much love and ACK. Steph Steph Steph. WRITEMOREOFTEN. oh eff. How you write Hae is sooooo goood. if if if, I quoted, I would quote like almost half of the whole thodlkngfmgf0ioii0otijngh thing.

<3<3<3<3 x29892374932mil. omg. *is dead* PS...&&soz for the illogical keysmashing x_X
파니: Eunhae awwrobotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)
I DID! All I could think when I posted was "OMG Where is Nhi! She would be so proud that I wrote T______T"

akjcsnalkcsn!! OMG SERIOUSLY!?!?!? *tackles*<3 ily!

Ah, it makes me even happier that you don't really like the pairing but read it and enjoyed it still. Because that means a lot to me. ^^

omgomg okay! I shall try to write more often! yes. I have some more in mind...and I have some that have been started for a while LOL.

!! really!? I love writing Hae, so I hope I do him justice. XD

OMG NO *revives* So much death today!

LOL I enjoy keysmashing. <3

Thank you for reading/commenting! YESkhasnkcjn
the other yuri: kihaesallysync on January 8th, 2009 06:34 am (UTC)
What a way to start my limited relaxation time!!!
That was hot! :D
파니robotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:26 pm (UTC)
:D! It's always good to start your relaxation off with some smut! XD
Wah! Thank you lots! ^^ I'm glad you liked it!
Ahhh, and you're welcome! XDD
hyejinnn on January 8th, 2009 07:27 am (UTC)
YOUR KIHAE SMUT IS SO HOT!*___* fjwkeanfklfhasdfksjlahs you wrote so well!! O.O im a mess You owe me, by the way o.o HAHAHAHA XD
파니: JaeMinrobotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:30 pm (UTC)
OMG REALLY!? Thank you! *blushes*
I'm glad you enjoyed it, yes yes. XDDD.
I aimed to get keyboard smashes, and I've been getting lots so I'm incredibly happy right now! XD
Thank you for reading/commenting! ^^
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Jishujishu on January 8th, 2009 01:52 pm (UTC)
I don't know how to comment anymore~ This is just too hot!!!
파니: Jaejin/Hongki streamersrobotiques on January 8th, 2009 02:46 pm (UTC)
kajcsnkjn! XDD Omg thank you~~~!
*happy happy*
I'm immensely happy that you enjoyed it! XD ♥
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파니: Hyukjae crackedrobotiques on January 8th, 2009 06:52 pm (UTC)
Thank youuu<3
I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^
♪ megan: MINHOsunev789 on January 19th, 2009 05:36 pm (UTC)
Like I've said, I don't usually read KiHae...They break up my HyukHae. POUTS.
I was melting all over the chair & my heart was racing & just...
Why don't you write more often, missy!? DDDD:<
I could imagine all of it so vividly too, like when he's looking in the mirror.
Like...I demand a sequel. When they get home & Hae pays his dues~?
Yeah, that's what I want. >:3333
파니: JaeMinrobotiques on January 20th, 2009 04:19 am (UTC)
omigawsh, I know. So thank you THANK YOU for reading my KiHae.
It always hurts breaking up HyukHae, it really does.
But I can read Hae with just about anyone...kind of. How slutty.
This wasn't even meant to be a KiHae. O.O! It just happened that way.
OMG MELTING!? HEART RACING!? OMG you're making me all jakbshcvfku, bb.
I KNOW! D: I fail, I do. I try to write more...but I get so sidetracked.
Not to mention I get half way through a story, and don't finish because I have another idea for another one.
I have maybe 6 or 7 going now!?
Actually, I just co-wrote a JaeChun with my friend an hour ago. >.> She is posting it at Hug, but I am going to put it in my fic journal too. XDDD
AH OMG YES. >.> I really really enjoyed writing the mirror scene.
A SEQUAL!? The thought did cross my mind. WE SHALL SEE!
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fine wine connoisseur.: Kibumkitkii on February 27th, 2009 11:32 pm (UTC)
*SPAZZES WITH LOVE* This is so GREATTTT <3333 I love your writing and everything just flowed so nicely and don't you dare say you are a bad writer because ajdsfkj;sl this was amazing ;;

파니: Fishy!robotiques on February 27th, 2009 11:56 pm (UTC)
AHBCKJANLKJ!!! *tackles*
This made me so happy.
I'm so glad you liked itttt<3
Now I am blushing! XDDD
Thank you for reading, Kit! ♥

yayay! reviews always put me on cloud nine.

Edited at 2009-02-27 11:57 pm (UTC)
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